Voici notre carte presque finalisée (cliquer pour agrandir).
La consigne est donc la suivante : à l'aide de l'inventaire ci-dessous, chaque élève de la classe est invité à faire un commentaire, sur un objet de son choix.
INVENTAIRE CARTE POSTALE SENSIBLE PDS (cliquer pour agrandir)
1. Donner un nom à l'objet (et préciser son numéro)
2. Raconter son histoire : pourquoi il est là, ce qu'il raconte, qui en a eu l'idée, qui l'a dessiné, ce que ça a apporté à la composition d'ensemble ...
3. Proposition (tout ou partie) en anglais valorisée !
4. Chacun doit traiter d'un objet différent. Il peut également en rajouter un s'il veut rectifier ou compléter une information dans le commentaire précédent. Cela suppose donc que chacun lise les commentaires précédents ...
5. Pour donner un exemple, je commence ...
30 réactions
1 De S.Gaujal - 13/12/2015,
N°8. Tortue. Turtle. Sorry je ne vais pas faire mieux en anglais. C'est Mélanie qui nous en a parlé pendant notre visite de la cité du Pont de Sèvres. Il parait que d'en haut, quant on habite sur la place Haute (des Alpes), c'est ce qu'on voit. Justine et Louann ne sont pas d'accord. Pour elles il s'agit plutôt d'un soleil. En tout cas cette petite tortue elle nous a bien plu, et encore plus quand Philippine l'a dessinée, car elle est très mignonne. Ceci dit, ça reste un clin d'œil très "private joke", à mon avis, à part nous, personne ne comprendra. Mais ça donne un peu de gaité à la Cité, et ça lui fait au moins un habitant ...
2 De Camille - 15/12/2015,
N°13 Cars.We saw the little cars for the first time in
the sketch of Mélanie P, which was much appreciated. The cars circling around the buildings give the cards a more lifefull aspect and remind us that the street is pedestrian. Mélanie P draw the cars. The cars are different colors, which brings a little joy in our sensitive map. Initially we thought put cars everywhere but finally we decided to put here and there. Mélanie's cars are a great idea so thank you Mélanie P !
3 De Philippine - 15/12/2015,
As I am the second, I'm lucky to choose what icon I want. So I'll choose the n.19 or the panel PDS, "created" by Quentin. All the class can remember when, during the "cadavre exquis", Quentin has raised his hand shyly, and came bravely to the board, under the meaning encouragements of our teacher Mrs Gaujal. And, in three lines of marker pen, he transported all of us on a highway, or at least on a road, on where we could have seen panels pass in front of our eyes. And we can say now that we fell in love with his drawing (especially Mrs Gaujal who talks about it on each session) which never leaved us in our drawings and in our vision of the PDS.
4 De Philippine - 15/12/2015,
Ah en fait je n'étais pas la second mais la thirst, thank you Camille de m'avoir devancée de 10seconds
5 De Gary - 16/12/2015,
I chose the N° 23 : The Working Panel, created and drawn by Dylan. It's a panel with a building machine inside that represents the fact that "L'Ile Seguin" is in works because it used to be a part the Renault factory, but it's about to become a cultural island. It shows the possibility that our postcard will be improve in the future. Also I disagree with Philipine on the fact that Mrs Gaujal fell in love with Quentin's draw, because yes she spoke many times of this one, but not that much recently, which means that she moved on.
6 De Gary - 16/12/2015,
7 De Héloïse - 16/12/2015,
Because I'm not the last one, I still have a large choice of icon. So I choose the N°31, it's the old Renault industry which is on the Ile Seguin. And someone decided to represent it by the logo of the brand. I tink it's Gary (or maybe someone else, sorry for this person...), and I think that he had a good idea for this, because all people can recognize the Renault brand to remember what it was in the past before the program of the design of the "Ile Seguin".
We studied the Renault's story, so we can easily recognize what it is
8 De Quentin - 17/12/2015,
I choose n°12 because this foot's traces remind the labyrinth of the "cité" of Pont de Sevres.
This big "cité" is made of many buildings and, when we are strangers, we can also get lost. The aspect of a game for children is pointed with the labyrinth.
So the "cité" of Pont de Sevres is a place with a lot of mystery to discover, maybe.
9 De maxime A - 17/12/2015,
N°19 the signs of PDS produce by Quentin.It was a briliant idea of him that he have in the classroom.For me this draw is the one that seems most important even if it is not very beautiful.
10 De Maxime D - 17/12/2015,
I choose to comment the writing : *PDS : cité du Pont de Sèvres. It's the number 18 made by Justine. This writing explains what means PDS because for us we know what it is however people who don't live in and know the "cité" won't understand the writing PDS. This writing explains the PDS written on the big panel. It's a little detail but very important because without it people will ask : What's PDS". It's our teens name for the Cité du Pont de Sevres. This writing was put on the last try of the map. Nobody had thought to put it before Justine. Nice job Justine !
11 De davila - 17/12/2015,
I chose the number 1 where it are registered "1970" thought by Justine. I find the idea to go back a bit and to give the date of creation of the Île Seguin created in very relevant 1970. It allows the getting in touch the destruction of the oldfactories Renault with the new district the Île Seguin
12 De davila - 17/12/2015,
I chose the number 1 where it are registered "1970" thought by Justine. I find the idea to go back a bit and to give the date of creation of the Île Seguin created in very relevant 1970. It allows the getting in touch the destruction of the oldfactories Renault with the new district the Île Seguin
13 De Gabriel - 17/12/2015,
I choose the number 38,the Eiffel Tower made by Maxime.D .
I choose it because it makes me laugh for the simple and good reason that she is horrible :-D
Now I can tell you Maxime your Eiffel Tower is very ugly :'D
But you did that with the heart so finally she is not so bad :)
14 De Neil - 17/12/2015,
I will pick the number 40 which is the feared cat drawn by Louann, she showed me it in a bigger size and I actually like it. Mrs. Gaujal asked for a feared character saying that it's scared from the PDS and Louann proposed to draw a cat which is "ruffling" its hairs and here's the result. Even if I prefer my cat, I'll pick Louann's.
15 De Neil - 17/12/2015,
I will pick the number 40 which is the feared cat drawn by Louann, she showed me it in a bigger size and I actually like it. Mrs. Gaujal asked for a feared character saying that it's scared from the PDS and Louann proposed to draw a cat which is "ruffling" its hairs and here's the result. Even if I prefer my cat, I'll pick Louann's.
16 De Oumayma - 17/12/2015,
I definitely have to choose the N°16 that represents a Subway logo.I'm sorry that i can't remember who had this idea and drew it but I think that is briliant to put it here because it's realistic.Also, it proves the connection between the whole borrow of the Ile Seguin/Trapèze/Place-Haute and Paris.By the way, i find it easy to recognise due to their familiarity with everyone:there are several logos like them in Boulogne-Billancourt.
17 De Mélanie P. - 17/12/2015,
I choose the n°25, the stars. They were made by Oumayma and Chania. This cute little stars surprised everyone. They are originals and thanks to them we can recognize easily the new buildings. I think it was a very good new idea. So, thank you Oumayma and Chania for this! It will be even better if we can add a little of shine.
18 De Anaelle A - 17/12/2015,
I choose the number 17. The Jacques Prevert high school. I choose it simply because it is our high school, because this leaves a small signature from us on this sensitive card. I think that it is the idea of Mrs Gaujal our teacher, I don't remember anyway it was a good idea. The only remark which I could make would be the fact that there are two panels in a so small card . what can make a lot,that's it.
19 De Aurelien - 17/12/2015,
I choose the n°33 : the city lights . The city lights are not yet finish but it's for soon . I don't know who makes ( to hesitate between Philippine and Oumayma but I am not sure ) but this idea has been used several times and it's an element inavoidable from the beginning . I think that whole the class likes this idea and that it's very important for the final production
20 De Aurelien - 17/12/2015,
a la place de whole c'est " all " désole
21 De Paul AU - 17/12/2015,
i takes me later but i choose number 29 draws by Dylan . I love this draw because i find doing well and has an important place in the new neighborhoods as it represents the new Boulogne .
22 De Cindy - 17/12/2015,
To conclude on this project, i chose to talk about Louann's cat. Personally, i think it brings a real plus and that it's really important to underline this idea. As we can see, it shows us how well the insecurity is represented throughout pont de Sèvres, and that we mustn't lean on that fact. As we can see, the cat isn't normal because it has all of his bristly hair. It show that the fear still present around this place and all of the people could fell it.
23 De louann - 18/12/2015,
I will pick the logo number 8 which is the world "Echo!", I can not really remember who drew it but I remember its story. Indeed , during our exit in the "PDS" we stopped in the "Place Haute" and we all kept the silence to pray attention to the noise. Then we wondered: "What will happen if we scream?" , at this moment Davila took the initiative to scream with a powerful voice "ECHOOOOO" and it actually resonated like "echooo....echoo...echo...ech..". So thank you Davila for this demonstration. I hope , Mme Gaujal, that you will understand the fact we comment in english, it is not against you but it is funnier like that, sorry again.
24 De s.gaujal - 18/12/2015,
@Louann : le dessin de l'ECHO est de Paul Au. et Héloïse.
@ Maxime D. Je ne suis pas d'accord avec Gabriel? Je trouve ta tour Eiffel super, elle étincelle magnifiquement ... Et sur le fond, j'aime bien l'incertitude dans laquelle elle nous laisse : une Citylight qui voit la Tour Eiffel ? Ou une Citylight qui se prend pour la Tour Eiffel, parée comme elle de mille feux ?
@Aurélien : les Citylights ont été réalisées par plusieurs personnes : c'est la manière dont Camille les avait faites surgir sur son premier croquis qui nous avait beaucoup plu. Elle a aussi repris l'idée de l'anthropomorphisation que j'avais suggérée, tout comme l'avait fait Philippine, ainsi que Louann et Justine. La forme définitive a été reprise sur le croquis de Louann et Justine. Les visages ont été dessinés par Nathan, Quentin et Philippine. Les tours ont été coloriées par Oumayma, en bleu, pour montrer que c'est nouveau, comme le quartier du Trapèze, et les deux ponts. Ensuite, les bulles sont le travail de Philippine, Louann et le petit chat est celui de Neil ... Les tours sont donc le résultat d'un travail collectif !!
25 De Nathan - 18/12/2015,
I chose number 29, because this drawing has been done well, he was realized by Dyllan. He represents the tower Jean Nouvel (Tour horizon). Find that she shows well the contrast enter the "cité" of the "Pont de Sèvres" and the new buildings of Trapez
26 De Antoine - 18/12/2015,
I choose the number 28 realized by M.Sergent, Quentin and Nathan. It show the relation between the PDS and the Trapèze. This gateway is a good thing for open the PDS to the world.
27 De Shaanya.M - 18/12/2015,
N°21. Traffic lights. I don't know who had this idea but I know that the drawing is of Omayma. It authorize or not the passage of vehicles on the tracks according to the color of light. This fire is important because it limits the car accidents. Moreover, it would be necessary to place an another Knight on the crossroad which is located below to avoid this kind of damage. As far as I am concerned Knight allows to the drawing to be more realistic even if it's just a small detail.
28 De Victoria - 18/12/2015,
N36 : the cat. I decided to choose Neil's cat because it´s really well drawn. It represents the nice and cute part of the pds because after all the pds is not as dangerous as people think it is
29 De Justine - 19/12/2015,
I choose the number 40 drawn by Louann: the cat.
I think it good way to represent people who is not living over there. People can be affraid by this imposing city and think there are dangerous persons. I think it is very good idea ! Moreover she drawn it with much details so well done Louann.
30 De Dylan - 04/01/2016,
I chose the number 19 because this is a good way to represent the Sevres Bridge neighborhood with this panel in abbreviating P.D.S