PHIL COLLINS Biography
Firstly, the veritable name of Phil Collins is Philip David Charles Collins. He’s born the thirth January of nineteen fifty-one in Chiswick; he’s sixty-height. He's an (very good!) english drummer, actor, record producer, singer, multi-instrumentalist and songwriter. His musical genre is Pop, progressive rock and Soul. He has blue eyes, was hair strands and now almost bald. He’s wearing glasses. He have five childrens : Lily, Simon, Joely, Matthew and Nicolas. He have five residences in : New York City, Miami (US), Dersingham (England), Begnins and Féchy (Switzerland).
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Secondly, from five years, he starts drum. It’s the beggining of his passion of rhythm and yet, his carrier was started in nineteen sixty-three. He was a drumer and singer of the group Genesis, an english rock band, at the years seventyth and olso was a solo career in parallel at years eightyth. He has 2 labels : Virgin and Atlantic. Finelly, today he is retired (unless) because he was oppered of his spine.
( https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Phil_Collins )
3 réactions
1 De SebastienZ1 - 19/09/2019, 2h02
The J uppercase of January
2 De SebastienZ1 - 19/09/2019, 2h13
the h of three
3 De _perlee_ - 22/09/2019, 11h07
Hi Raphael, your text is good but I found two little mistakes.
In the first paragraph, you wrote "He HAVE five CHILDRENS {...} and Nicolas.". Firstly, you must to write "he has" because "he" is the subject of your sentence. And secondly, the plural of "child" is "children" not "childrens" !
Friendly, Perle :)