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https://fr.wikipedia.org/wiki/Michael_Jackson His real name is
Michael Joseph Jackson and he was birth the twenty-nine of
August nineteen-fiftyeight at United States in Gary in Indiana.
He was the eighth child in the Jackson family, his parents are
Joe Jackson and Katherine Jackson. Michael Jackson was
Married to Lisa Marie Presley and after, Debbie Rowe. He was
an American singer, songwriter, and dancer.
He is the singer who have the most records, he was the
best singer in the world. He has brown eyes, long, black
and curly hair.
He was not very tall and he was slim. Michael Jackson
was funny, good and nice. He was a very good singer.
He liked sing, dance and write music.
He liked drums, the guitar and other instruments. His famous
songs are Billie Jean, Smooth Criminal, Beat it, Thriller and
many other songs. He is dead the twenty-five of September
twenty-o-nine.
He is the King of the Pop forever.
Written by Sébastien Zaoui
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1 De RaphaelH1 - 19/09/2019, 2h19
I've found 2 errors :
At the ligne 9,"have" must be "was" because Michael is dead (and it's the 3rd person).
And at the ligne 16 it's not "He his dead" but "he is dead".