Ed Sheeran
Edward Christopher Sheeran is his name ,(Ed sheeran is his artist name) .
He was born in Halifax, West Yorkshire, on seventeen February nineteen-ninety-one.
His parents, John and Imogen, are from London but his grandparents are Irish.
Ed Sheeran possesses a great talent for creativity and self expression, typical of many accomplished writers, poets, actors and musicians.
He is also witty, owns the gift for gab, and savors the limelight he is optimistic .
He like Tatoos ,love guitares and he is crazy about animals .
He measure one,seventy-three Meter and is wheight is aproximatly eigthy-two kg
he have blue eyes and short ginger hair.
Sheeran began recording music in two thousand four and independently released his first collection of work, Spinning Man.He released another EP in two thousand nine, You Need Me.
I love her music, he are talentuous and i think to he have also a long road before the end of his career.
https://fr.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ed_Sheeran
https://healthyceleb.com/ed-sheeran-height-weight-body-statistics/14284
4 réactions
1 De AlyssaG1 - 19/09/2019, 2h16
you did not write the date in letter
2 De Clara - 19/09/2019, 2h18
Ed Sheeran is a boy so you must write "his" instead of "her" because your star it isn't a girl! moreover we don't use to number for the weight and the size.
3 De MaudS1 - 19/09/2019, 2h30
It's " he likes" not "he like"
4 De _perlee_ - 22/09/2019, 12h01
Hello Nicolas, your text is good but you made some little mistakes.
Regulary, you forgot the "s" example:
-"He like tattoos, love guitares {...} about animals." -> "he likes tattoos, he loves guitars..."
-"he have" -> "he has "
-"I love her music, he are talentous {...} of his career." -> "I love his music, he is talented{...} of his career."
I just have a question, why you wrote "short ginger hair"? I don't understand...
Friendly, Perle :)