VALD
Vald is a rapeur and him name is Valentin Le Du and He was born the fifteeth of July one thousand nine hundred and ninety-nine, he has a twenty-six year old . He was born is Saint-Denis.
He is funny,cool and clever person.
He likes playing video games,his favorite color is blue and his favorite rapeur is Snopp Dog and Lorenzo.
He is not very tall,he is a little thin,he has a short blond hair and he has a brown eyes.He is a little strong.
He wrote the books but it was bad.He played football because he loved team Paris . He finally made album of music in two thousand and twelveand he published intwo thousand and fifteen a music named "Bonjour" this music made the buzz in France. Then in two thousand and seventeen he was released a music very known him name is "Désaccordé".
Vald is a best rapeur for me because he is the funniest . He is awesome and incredible .
By Mario
5 réactions
1 De mathis bg - 18/09/2018, 11h58
before the dates you need to write on .you writted him but the good word is his
2 De BriceY1 - 18/09/2018, 12h06
I hate Vald because
3 De LucasG1 - 22/09/2018, 11h07
Is a little short for a blogpost and writte more of anecdotes!
4 De RomainJ1 - 23/09/2018, 11h40
Your blog is interesting and we feel that you are a fan of vald
5 De AnaisT1 - 23/09/2018, 2h49
Your blogpost is not bad ! Here some things to improve it :
• Vald is a rapper and his name is...
• He was born on the fifteeth of July...
• one thousand nine hundred and ninety-nine -> nineteen ninety-nine, that's just easier to say
• he is
atwenty-six...• He is funny, cool and clever
person.• ...his favorite rappers are Snoop Dogg and Lorenzo.
My correction isn't complete, you should read again your whole text to correct your gammar and spelling mistakes.
You also could add some anecdotes, because your blogpost is not very long.