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Your article is may be quite short, but interesting. You have a mystake, youe wrote "she was born on the tenth of November". I think is the on not necesseray. And why is "married" on black if the rest is in blue ? It's not important but i'm perfectionist :) Your wrote too ninety "niniety" and you have an alinea at "she produced", at the end. I'm very meticulous :)
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1 De MarieC1 - 18/09/2018, 12h15
Your text is really good but you can write "5 brothers" in letters.
2 De SvetlanaS1 - 21/09/2018, 1h52
You have one mistake: childrens and writte children. Children is a plural ! But her texte is good
3 De ArtemiseD1 - 21/09/2018, 5h59
Your article is may be quite short, but interesting. You have a mystake, youe wrote "she was born on the tenth of November". I think is the on not necesseray. And why is "married" on black if the rest is in blue ? It's not important but i'm perfectionist :) Your wrote too ninety "niniety" and you have an alinea at "she produced", at the end. I'm very meticulous :)
4 De ArtemiseD1 - 22/09/2018, 1h02
Oups, excuse-me. Your are right, we must also writing "she was born on...". Sooorryy !