My favorite pictures is Ocean's eleven so i create a post on Georges Clooney the first actor in the movie.
His name is Georges clooney and his nickname is Georgeous George. He was born the sixth of may in ninteen sixthy-one at Lexington in Kentucky in USA. He's american. He was a producer an actor a director and a scriptwriter.His mother's name is Nina Bruce and his father's name is Nick Clooney.
He played in Ocean's eleven and twelve and Gravity. He made famous grace a Urgences a series american. He associated with Steven Soderbergh for created the box Section eight. His begginings is difficult. After the series Urgences he began his real career. This year he have 57 years old so it's the end of his career.
4 réactions
1 De AnaisT1 - 20/09/2018, 6h41
Here some advices to improve your blogpost (;
• My favorite picture
s... And Ocean's Eleven is a movie, so you should replace "picture" by "movie" or "film".• He was born on the sixth of may in ninteen sixthy-one...
• He
wasis a producer an actor... He is not dead, so you should use the present to talk about what he is and what he does.• He made famous grace a Urgences a series american... "made famous" is not very correct i think, "became famous" is better. Also, it's not "grace" but "through", and it's "an american series", not "a series american".
• ...Soderbergh to create the box...
• His beginnings were difficult...
• This year he has...
you should add some dates, and being more expressive because you are supposed to be a "fan" !
2 De HenryC1 - 22/09/2018, 11h49
Hello Arthure I love this blog but maybe you can put linking words.
There is a sentence and a lot of information ,this blog is great
3 De ThomasT1 - 22/09/2018, 2h56
The blog is good but there is mistakes on the blog and I think you add more precisons for that actor.
Why do you not express your perception ? It's damage but it's a good blog !
4 De SimeonD1 - 23/09/2018, 10h46
Don't forget to write "I " with a capital letter next time !
This blog post is a little short don't you think ?