We voted for story number 5 (we can't see it on the poll, we don't know why) because it was well written, with a rich vocabulary and nice turns of phrase that make the text enjoyable.
I prefer and I chose the story of the Group 4 because it is, I think, the most well-written. Their story is also part of the stories which have the best plot!
I choose the story 4 because the story is very well written, there are elements which represent entirely a passage of a novel. The choice to make the narrator talk in the first person is good because with that we have lots of details and we are immersed in the story.
Good job the team 4 !
My favourite story was the fourth one, written by Mathilde and Sarah. Their writing style is similar to what I've seen and read in real English novels. The descriptions are precise and written in an elevated language.
The reader is given an insight to the character's thoughts with questions that show his absence. The present and the past are mixed in a smooth way. This excerpt would make me buy the novel. Thanks for your hard work!
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Great job!! Well done to you all!
We voted for story number 5 (we can't see it on the poll, we don't know why) because it was well written, with a rich vocabulary and nice turns of phrase that make the text enjoyable.
We prefer the 4th story because we find it is the story the most apocalyptic, with a character completely scared of what happens.
I prefer and I chose the story of the Group 4 because it is, I think, the most well-written. Their story is also part of the stories which have the best plot!
I choose the story 4 because the story is very well written, there are elements which represent entirely a passage of a novel. The choice to make the narrator talk in the first person is good because with that we have lots of details and we are immersed in the story.
Good job the team 4 !
My favourite story was the fourth one, written by Mathilde and Sarah. Their writing style is similar to what I've seen and read in real English novels. The descriptions are precise and written in an elevated language.
The reader is given an insight to the character's thoughts with questions that show his absence. The present and the past are mixed in a smooth way. This excerpt would make me buy the novel. Thanks for your hard work!